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Autumn

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Its getting cold here, but the light and the colours are wonderful. My favorite time of the year.

Please critique. :heart:

`Elandria *Angelia61-Stock ~pixievamp-stock ~spiritsighs-stock
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

You have requested me to critique this artwork by placing it in the "critique me " folder at #FotoManipulationz Let me start by saying that When I first saw this piece ,I had a clear vision of Autums beauty . You've captured that feeling of the season quite nicely and your background components are both well suited and masterfully blended creating the perfect scene. The Highlighting and painting on the hair of the model (the always beautiful <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/e/l/e…" alt=":iconelandria:" title="Elandria"/> ) is very pretty , and reflects the crisp breeze one's hair might catch on an enchanting and brisk Autumn day.And finally , The addition of the hummingbird is also a great choice , bringing more interest and color to this fabulous fall scene.
This piece does hold one very unfortunate weakness for me.While the glowing orange eyes are a cool effect , the other shading and detailing on the girls face and chest has demolished her beauty , and is actually making her appear a bit demonic. It is unhclear if this was your intention as it ~IS~ Halloween time , but I find that it is quite distracting in what may have been an awe inspiring piece of art.